Post by harrisonashbay on Oct 31, 2016 0:44:52 GMT -5
Well I made an attempt at a scary story with Halloween coming up.
The Savage Murder by Ash
Mike and Jill were an active adorable couple that went camping in the hills. It was Fall the ground was covered in leafs it was a very pretty orange scene in the hills. There were lots of trees and it was far away from other people.
They hiked through the woods until they found there campsite. They set up there tent for the night in spot by the water that would have great romantic view of the night sky. As it started to get dark a crow perched on a near by tree. A quiet crow with a shine in it's feathers.
After the camp fire died down and they fell asleep Mike and Jill were awaken from there sleep by the noise of a large murder of crows being very loud. With a light of the full moon they could see lots of the noisy birds. A cold breeze made gave them a chill. They were surprised by the tent catching fire and surprised again while trying to put out the fire the crows attacked them. After swatting a few away they ran away from the attacking birds. As they ran it got darker and darker they could hardly see a thing. The crows followed them like a cat chasing a mouse. Mike and Jill ran as fast as they could. They found them selves falling and rolling down a hill.
Jill looked and saw the shiny feathers of the crows and saw that the crows were diving down. Jill jumped up and ran. She ran as fast as she could until she tripped over a log. She realized that Mike wasn't with her. With no crows around she called to him and back tracked looking for him. It was quiet it got lighter easier to see. By where she fell down the it was really cold and there was a bad smell in the air.
In the morning Mike was limping he hurt both his legs in night knees were throbbing in pain. Trying hard to walk he called in very horse voice to Jill. As fate would have it he'd find a sight that make his heart sink. When the police arrived they found three other bodies of women in the hills.
The Savage Murder by Ash
Mike and Jill were an active adorable couple that went camping in the hills. It was Fall the ground was covered in leafs it was a very pretty orange scene in the hills. There were lots of trees and it was far away from other people.
They hiked through the woods until they found there campsite. They set up there tent for the night in spot by the water that would have great romantic view of the night sky. As it started to get dark a crow perched on a near by tree. A quiet crow with a shine in it's feathers.
After the camp fire died down and they fell asleep Mike and Jill were awaken from there sleep by the noise of a large murder of crows being very loud. With a light of the full moon they could see lots of the noisy birds. A cold breeze made gave them a chill. They were surprised by the tent catching fire and surprised again while trying to put out the fire the crows attacked them. After swatting a few away they ran away from the attacking birds. As they ran it got darker and darker they could hardly see a thing. The crows followed them like a cat chasing a mouse. Mike and Jill ran as fast as they could. They found them selves falling and rolling down a hill.
Jill looked and saw the shiny feathers of the crows and saw that the crows were diving down. Jill jumped up and ran. She ran as fast as she could until she tripped over a log. She realized that Mike wasn't with her. With no crows around she called to him and back tracked looking for him. It was quiet it got lighter easier to see. By where she fell down the it was really cold and there was a bad smell in the air.
In the morning Mike was limping he hurt both his legs in night knees were throbbing in pain. Trying hard to walk he called in very horse voice to Jill. As fate would have it he'd find a sight that make his heart sink. When the police arrived they found three other bodies of women in the hills.